by Cecelia HollandI had to stop reading this book. Between the twelve different characters' names dropped in the first chapter, with zero character development, and some clunky writing, I just couldn't go on. Example: "Sabotai smiled. “You know the Yasa—if your clan needed you you could have refused to come." What editor allowed that sentence to remain?! And dialogue: so much of it, with no real character development in the first two chapters?
Reading shouldn't be a matter of patience on the readers' part. I don't understand all of the rave reviews.
|Title||Until the Sun Falls|
|eBook format||Paperback, (torrent)|
|File size||2.1 Mb|
|Book rating||4.31 (91 votes)